Aug 14, 2012

Mirror

mirror, mirror on the wall


do you belong to some actress
oblivious of her heart,
ever wanting to be admired
for the makeup man's art.

afraid of anonymity
ignoring the voice within,
she cared for masks
more than her own skin.

couldn't she ever
let herself stay,
just coz she was known
some other way.


mirror, mirror on the wall

have you turned friendly
or still speak the truth?
why don't you tell her
a lot more she is worth!

all she'll get
is comedown and pity,
by drifting away
from
her wonderful originality!


6 comments:

  1. Madam,aaine me asliyat dhoond rahe ho ya khud ki shaksiyat talash rahe ho.anyways.. Nice work.1

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  2. Really Good :)
    Nice usage of words which bought beauty to the Lines !!!!

    But.....

    "I'm a bit frightened of the idea of full facelift because, when you look in the mirror, you want to look like yourself".

    Isiliye aaj kal mirror mein dekna bandh kardiya :) I mean it Nits:)

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  3. One of the followers of this blog just dropped me a mail:
    "Mirror blog is awful...dint expect frm u."

    Here is my reply, which I wanted to reach all those who care :)

    "appreciate ur fair opinion! :)
    however just FYI, I never claimed to be some great poetess.Also this blog says its only 'a try an effort' to put my random thoughts into words..and just like another human being I can also be awful at times. :)
    Glad that u put an honest remark per ur feel..will try to improve :)"

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    1. Care to Sab karte hain ND :) Because.....
      Some Magical Power in You makes everyone happy around You!!

      Pune is Missing Magical Girl Now only Tragic all around :(..

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    2. accept d happiness part :)
      otherwise this was a 'kuchh bhi!' comment. :/

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