the thought of tracing back
those few steps of mine
is unwanted n scary
n tough to determine!
why was I trapped
to threads unseen
no efforts could resolve,
how-so-ever keen.
would you only watch
or try to answer
the queries unquestioned
that I still ponder;
or shall I assume:
not everything is to be told
to the world..out n bold,
few are meant to realize n cure
to make d recovery fast n sure...
Nitya dear i suggest please re-think on the below line :
ReplyDelete"why was I trapped to threads unseen"
--Nobody gets trapped.. instead You can say Unavoidable Invisible Threads"
Thats a Magic of Threads my Best Friend:)
when did we turn best of friends?? :P
Deletebtw interesting suggestion.. :)
kuch cheej dil se hoti hai...dimag se nahi...chahe kitni koshish kar lo(thas why those are unseen..)
ReplyDeletehmm ...
DeleteBee...1
Deleteपहले तो अक्सर होता था,
ReplyDeleteवो कहते थे हिचकी आ रही थी,
जब जब मेरा नाम लिया बन्द हो गई थी,
अब ऐसी कोई बात नही,
ऐसा नही कि उन्हें अब हिचकी नही आती,
पर मेरा नाम लेने से बन्द नही होती,
पता नही कि वे याद नही करते,
या मैं याद नही आता,
काश एक बार फ़िर,
वे याद तो मुझे करते,
फ़िर वैसे ही कहते,
कि लग रहा था कि,
मैं इत्तफ़ाक से मिलूंगा,
और मैं मिल भी जाता,
पर ऐसा क्या हुआ जो,
याद तो दूर भूल कर भी,
मेरी भूलों को नही भूलते,
पर सच तो यह है कि,
याद तो मै भी नही करता उन्हें,
क्योंकि मैं पहले भूल तो जाऊं उन्हे,
तब तो याद करूं। (inspired by somewhere..)
याद तो दूर भूल कर भी,
Deleteमेरी भूलों को नही भूलते,
well written.. nice usage of words!
Apke naye post ka wait kar raha hu.
ReplyDeleteon its way..
DeleteHappy independence day.
ReplyDeletewish u d same..
DeleteHappy eid to u n al of u family.
ReplyDeletewish u d same.
Deleteयाद
ReplyDeleteतो दूर भूल
कर भी,
मेरी भूलों
को नही
भूलते,
Kya yeh line apki nizi zindagi se koi talluk rakhti hai.kyoki manovigyan kehta hai humein jab tak koi cheej pasand\napasand nahi aati jab tak humse linked na ho... Any comment..1
I commended the lines for the sheer talent of the writer :)
DeleteMany non sportsmen do praise good players on field..one doesn't need to play the game oneself to appreciate others!
really ?????
Deleteat least I believe so.
DeleteBut one must know the rules of game to enjy the game...
ReplyDeletemay be. so?
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