बेईमानियों के साथ खेल खेल रही हूँ I think u feel enjy while playing w/dishonest.aur unse haar ke bhi inaam mila hai apko. Nice imagination...(no thnks...pls!!)1
Welldone!!written w/matured thaughts.very nice collection n combination of wrds. but do u thnk is it fair to play w/dishonestly with someone who is fair w/u..(dats why u r loosing.) anyways nicely penned.keep up ths spirit ahead.
Lekin yahan haarne se kya meaning.one hand,u r saying that u dnt wanna stuck w/wrong thng,but stil u wanna fulfil u dream too.yahan cheez clr nahi hui..and lastly u wana have that drm come true too...1 :-)
Ek sapna hai,suna raha hai ek beiman saajo se.. Dhun to sunti hai par matlab jahir nahi hota.. Khel raha hu main,khila raha hai wo, Lagta hai kabhi ki ek kathputli ban gaya hu uske haath ki!! Pls give modification to these lines..i want to c these as urs
problem.. aatm-samarpadan ki hai, uske baaad hi sapne ko saakaar kiya ja sakta hai, tabhi tum, TUM se mil paoogi. Jahan tak haar jeet ki baat hai, to.., mujhe lagta hai shayad TUM-HI to ab tak jeetati aai hoo, aur shayad, is 'TUM-HI' se hi tum pareshan hoo. Ek baar is 'TUM-HI' se door hoo kar dekhoo, shayad tum kuch haarne ke baad bhi, jeetne se bad-kar khushi ka ehsaas mahsuus karoo jis jeet ki tumhe talaash hai..
People are led to write a poem because they have been strongly moved by some event. They’ve experienced a strong emotion, received an insight, and wish to capture the experience in words. Only a few, however, succeed in turning the experience into a poem that will be meaningful to another person.
I would most humbly submit: Poetry is personal, no doubt, but good poetry should be universal. All poetry is good (to somebody at least), but the best are those that convey a universal message (truth?).... And that's the reason I like the above Poem (Specially choice of words )...This is wonderful Poem.. GoodLuck for your new Post.. Keep it up ..
ND, I never knew you were into writing... you seem to be doing pretty good here, my dear!:) This poem is just wonderful..liked it d most. To me, its words are quite a reflection of you.
Heyee sweetie.. if u genuinely liked it, there must be something in it! thank u so much :) haan khali dimag n time yahi sab karvata rahta hai :P kabhi kabhar kuchh theek thak si bhi ban jati hain :)
बेईमानियों के साथ
ReplyDeleteखेल खेल रही हूँ
I think u feel enjy while playing w/dishonest.aur unse haar ke bhi inaam mila hai apko. Nice imagination...(no thnks...pls!!)1
Jahapanah!! Tussi gr888 ho!!nice miss perfect.
ReplyDeleteWelldone!!written w/matured thaughts.very nice collection n combination of wrds.
ReplyDeletebut do u thnk is it fair to play w/dishonestly with someone who is fair w/u..(dats why u r loosing.) anyways nicely penned.keep up ths spirit ahead.
Thank u!
DeleteIt might not be fair but then u always get addicted to those so called wrong things n I'm no exception.
Lekin yahan haarne se kya meaning.one hand,u r saying that u dnt wanna stuck w/wrong thng,but stil u wanna fulfil u dream too.yahan cheez clr nahi hui..and lastly u wana have that drm come true too...1 :-)
DeleteND.You can BUY anything in this world but NOBODY can BUY DREAMS!
ReplyDeleteI realized what is the difference in DREAMS and REALITY!!
But No Use
DREAMS remains as DREAMS ONLY!
"Everyone wants to make History but at the end they will remain in History Only"
Is dil ka kya karoon,main kya karoon,main kya karoon...
ReplyDeleteEk sapna hai,suna raha hai ek beiman saajo se..
ReplyDeleteDhun to sunti hai par matlab jahir nahi hota..
Khel raha hu main,khila raha hai wo,
Lagta hai kabhi ki ek kathputli ban gaya hu uske haath ki!!
Pls give modification to these lines..i want to c these as urs
problem.. aatm-samarpadan ki hai, uske baaad hi sapne ko saakaar kiya ja sakta hai, tabhi tum, TUM se mil paoogi. Jahan tak haar jeet ki baat hai, to.., mujhe lagta hai shayad TUM-HI to ab tak jeetati aai hoo, aur shayad, is 'TUM-HI' se hi tum pareshan hoo. Ek baar is 'TUM-HI' se door hoo kar dekhoo, shayad tum kuch haarne ke baad bhi, jeetne se bad-kar khushi ka ehsaas mahsuus karoo jis jeet ki tumhe talaash hai..
ReplyDeleteAwesome Lines Anonymous :)
DeleteAisa Samjao Nitya Ko :) But pata hai
No one can make her understand except herself.....
"Dedication on something you really like without any restrictions for yourself will surely makes you successful person"
excellent.....
ReplyDelete"हारे हुए इनाम ".............कमाल के बात....
अनु
Thanks a lot Anu :)
DeletePeople are led to write a poem because they have been strongly moved by some event. They’ve experienced a strong emotion, received an insight, and wish to capture the experience in words. Only a few, however, succeed in turning the experience into a poem that will be meaningful to another person.
ReplyDeleteI would most humbly submit:
Poetry is personal, no doubt, but good poetry should be universal.
All poetry is good (to somebody at least), but the best are those that convey a universal message (truth?).... And that's the reason I like the above Poem (Specially choice of words )...This is wonderful Poem.. GoodLuck for your new Post.. Keep it up ..
Regards..!!
Sharad
The definition of great poetry would vary.. and in any case, falling into that very category will be sheer accomplishment!
Deletefor me, I have just started crawling into 'this' world and shall be deeply touched if only my words are able to make some sense to the readers :).
Thanks a lot for your kind words.. :)
DeleteEven I see eye to eye on your comment...:)
Again Wish you very best of luck for your upcoming words on your new poetry....
Glad..Thank u once again :)
DeleteND, I never knew you were into writing... you seem to be doing pretty good here, my dear!:)
ReplyDeleteThis poem is just wonderful..liked it d most. To me, its words are quite a reflection of you.
Looking forward to see more of such great stuff.
-Soniya
Heyee sweetie.. if u genuinely liked it, there must be something in it!
Deletethank u so much :)
haan khali dimag n time yahi sab karvata rahta hai :P kabhi kabhar kuchh theek thak si bhi ban jati hain :)
thanks n love.. keep visiting .. :)
Ek hi khwaab kai baar dekha hai?!
ReplyDeleteYeah, more like I want to dream this deliberately. It's not just happening to me; I have full control over it.
DeleteAt least, was!