कांच के टुकड़े
बिखरे है चारों तरफ
इतने चमकदार.... लुभावने ।
सब में अपना अक्स सा कुछ दिखता है
जब भी कोई टुकड़ा उठाती हूँ
चुभ जाते है कुछ हाथों में
कुछ पैरों में
छलक आती है चंद बूँदें
गाढ़ी .. लाल ।
अरसा एक गुज़रता है फिर
कसक जाने में
भूल जाती हूँ अपना चेहरा
दर्द भी ... निशां भी ।
और फिर दौड़ पड़ती हूँ
उन्ही कांच के टुकड़ों की तरफ
अपना नया अक्स देखने ।
Nice andy !! Zakham khane ka kuch shauk lag gaya hai apko !! All nice..but word "gadha" seems little awkword..rather it shud b "shurkh" but its my perception..may b its written in sum other context.... :) 1.
ReplyDeletehaan ho sakta hai 'गाढ़ी' padhte hue awkward lagi ho.. I wanted to mention the intensity of blood(pain), 'surkh' would have only been adjective to the color(Red).
DeleteThough not sure which one would have suited better!
Thanks for your suggestion :)
उदासियों की वजह तो बहुत हैं
ReplyDeleteज़िन्दगी में
पर बेवजह खुश रहने का शायद
मज़ा ही कुछ और है ... Stupid
सार्थक प्रस्तुति
ReplyDeleteधन्यवाद् :)
Delete'गाढ़ी' is perfect here.. as a reader 'surkh' would have indicated to me that the pain is of a certain nature, certain context .. 'गाढ़ी' indicates that this pain has a slow, brooding intensity..
ReplyDeleteAh, the relief of using the right word! :)
DeleteStupid.. Don't hurt urself w/those glass pieces...u know perhaps those r just a colorful illusions...
ReplyDelete(u know what i mean...)
Otherwise u try to make a kleidioscope and then see the life... Its really so beautiful... Isn't it??
Merry christmas !!
Ye Ishq Nahi Hain Asan
ReplyDeleteBass Itna Samaj Lijie
Ek Aag Ka Dariya Hain
Aur Dub Ke Jana Hain
very nice lines mam.... Touching and Real. Hatts off to You... I can never imagin ki aap itna Accha bhi likh Sakti hai.... Keep it up...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Kushal :)
DeleteU probably didn't know much of me back in college, those who knew can relate with this part of me! I am glad u like my attempts with words. :)